As night falls

All is quiet in the city of London  its one O clock and only one thing is awake. A little black cat lay on the edge of the giant double bed thinking and thinking and thinking. Slowly she stood up and yawned longingly. Next she jumped of the bed and onto the cold laminate floor and walked slowly down the white narrow stairs. When she got downstairs she completely passed the black figure that was creeping up behind her luckily she scurried through the cat flap just in time. The moon was full and it was shining onto the rocky gravel road that was forever on going.

SUDDENLY! the road started to part it seemed like an earthquake but it was something completely different. A mysterious creature slowly rose from the crack and glowing red eyes were seen. Shadow the cat froze to the spot and before you could’ve said boo she was gone. When the sun rose, Shadows owners Mandy and Luke looked for her but she never returned they put up missing posters of her and everything but no one had any sign of her. Until one day a lady named Scarlet spotted her hiding inside of a bush and ran to pick her up she was so happy because Mandy and Luke were offering 5000 pounds reward money if anyone found her so she took Shadow into her little cottage and went to ring Mandy and Luke but what Scarlet didn’t know was that shadow was cursed. once Mandy and Luke found out Scarlet had Shadow they went to pick her up immediately but when they got there Shadow was gone Scarlet said “I definitely had her and all my windows and doors were closed also there isn’t a cat flap because i don’t have a cat”Mandy and Luke were both devastated when they found out Scarlet didn’t have Shadow, but what they didn’t know is that shadow was listening.

As night fell Shadow came out of her hiding place and somehow went through the window and into the black night. Fortunately she went straight to sleep without summoning the spirits at least that’s what she thought. When the sun rose once again Shadow was in a completely different place it looked like she was in France but it was so hard for her to tell because she was so confused. All through the day she wasn’t hungry because she found millions of mice all hiding in one spot. After she’d eaten she turned around ever so slightly and by one look she knew she wasn’t in France any more because she saw Big Ben. Shadow was so scared but she knew she had gone there for a reason as she was thinking a zap of lightning slashed the air her little paws trembled then she took two steps forward and ended up in France she was confused but also happy she’d always wanted to see the Eiffel Tower but this was not the way she would expect to see it. Once again the dry ground started to part and all the memories came back to her she was so petrified that she didn’t see that the crack was getting so close that in one step she fell down it. She tumbled and down down down she fell into the deep dark hole, you couldn’t even see her shadow and for her, time stopped…..

5 Comments on "As night falls"

  1. Eesha Hussain | Oct 21, 2018 at 8:12 pm | Reply

    I think it is very interesting

  2. Aarzoo Hussain | Oct 31, 2018 at 5:53 pm | Reply

    I think it is scary and fab

  3. Aarzoo Hussain | Nov 13, 2018 at 5:46 pm | Reply

    It is so good that I jumped out of my seat.


  4. It’s scary, I like it

  5. Lewis + Makaio | Jan 22, 2019 at 9:32 am | Reply

    This is a amazing story.

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