Best Animal poem ever

cats are very lazy
every day they drive me crazy
they scratch me with their claw
and try to open the front door.

Lions have massive fluffy manes
these lions are fare from tame.

Little puppies jump from place to place
but they get exited and love to

snakes like to sliver when I see them at
the zoo they always make me shiver.
they all ways eat there meat people make
them bad guys so they can cheat

I like to watch baby sheep
because they like to jump and leap.
But there all ways so cute.

Cheaters are really fast
so in animal races they will
never come last.

Hamsters like to exercise in a ball
but watch out because they love to roll they’re very
fast, but there the same with the cheater
they’ll never come last.

rats are sometimes nice
but there just fat versions of
little mice.

11 Comments on "Best Animal poem ever"

  1. Harley Schofield-Wilson | Sep 29, 2017 at 2:09 pm | Reply

    I think I did well on my first fab mag.

  2. Sajidur Rahman | Sep 29, 2017 at 2:14 pm | Reply

    Harley this poem is great! This is a great start on fab mag! I really like rhyming poems and yours definitely rhymes.

  3. KELSIE WALSH | Oct 5, 2017 at 1:41 pm | Reply

    This is really funny and very long and good you have write a lovely poem and i really like it.

  4. Maisie Loftus | Oct 5, 2017 at 2:56 pm | Reply

    I like your rhyming words by the way and great idas i love animals too

  5. Alicja Domagala | Oct 17, 2017 at 11:09 am | Reply

    Really good poem and really good ryming words and yes you have done well for your first FAB MAG!

  6. i really like that poem because it does remind me off the animals and i like your riming words well done

  7. i like the way you have put little paragraphs in the poem and loads of rhiming words aswell.

  8. Harriet Mclaren | Nov 17, 2017 at 11:43 am | Reply

    Well Done! You did really well Harley! I love rhyming poems! You’re really good at Fabmag!Well done,keep it up!

  9. I liked your poem Harley my favorite verse was the puppy verse I liked it because my puppy came charging at my brother while i was eating my breakfast then it missed`my brother and came sliding into my chair leg I felt bad for my dog because it must of hurt her

  10. joshua chamberlain | Nov 17, 2017 at 11:51 am | Reply

    you have made me want to read more and the puppies sound so adorable

  11. Martha Davies | Mar 19, 2018 at 12:23 pm | Reply

    Good animal poem!

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