Horror night

Friday 13th was the night when this tragic incident happened. It was when Charlie and his friend William went to go on an adventure in the woods when they saw something they had never seen before…                               

        “Time to get ready for school Charlie” shouted Mum from downstairs. 

“I’m coming in a minute” screeched Charlie. Charlie didn’t like going to school he thought it was boring, he was one of the naughty children who loved sitting next to his friend so he could chat to them about how good he was on his play station.                    “Right then off you pop” said Mum giggling, “have a nice day”                                         “I’m sure I will” said Charlie with an attitude.                                                                           As Charlie was walking to school he saw his mate William and said hi to him, William said hi back, they were like bast friends every night they would got to the woods together to see if anything mysterious was there, but there never was anything to be seen. William said to Charlie “meet me at the woods at 7 o’clock, you can’t be late.                                                                                                                                          “Ok I promise I will be there on time” said Charlie hoping he won’t be late.                     School was over and Charlie and William were excited to go to the woods as usual. At 6:30  William rang Charlie telling him to set off just to make sure they weren’t late. When they both got to the woods and saw each other they both said they felt like they got punched in the stomach and the atmosphere just didn’t feel right. Then they heard growling like someone or something was coming back to life, like someone was following them. They both just carried on adventuring and trying not to think that something creepy was happening, but then all of a sudden they heard the loudest scream ever so they ran towards the sound thinking someone was being hurt or abused, then the strangest most scariest thing happened. They saw zombies yes zombies and they were all feasting on a women who they only just killed for their lunch. Oh no the zombies saw the boys. They both ran. They weren’t fast enough. They both slipped. ARGHHHHH!                                                                                                                                           …


9 Comments on "Horror night"

  1. Elliott Hale | Oct 19, 2018 at 2:07 pm | Reply

    Great story Alysia very scary i like the ending.

  2. Jasmine Petrozzi | Oct 19, 2018 at 2:13 pm | Reply

    great story Alysia got me a bit scared.

  3. Eesha Hussain | Oct 19, 2018 at 9:10 pm | Reply

    Hi I really loved this article keep the good work up don’t forget to comment me

  4. Eesha Hussain | Oct 20, 2018 at 9:56 am | Reply

    I just can’t stop reading this because it is so good keep the good work up!!!!

  5. Eesha Hussain | Oct 20, 2018 at 2:23 pm | Reply

    SO INTERESTING I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

  6. Aarzoo Hussain | Oct 20, 2018 at 2:25 pm | Reply

    well done

  7. Aarzoo Hussain | Oct 20, 2018 at 5:47 pm | Reply

    I really like it i got so scared that i jumped out my seat !!!

  8. Kelsie walsh | Oct 21, 2018 at 1:06 pm | Reply

    Your story is awesome i got a bit scared reading it. It was very spooky a good way to set the halloween vibe

  9. This story proves you can never trust a zombie! Well done Alysia.

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