The Netball Game!!!

On Thursday 13th November some girls from years 4,5 and 6 played in a netball tournament.They got dropped off at Holy Family in the Miss Bird’s car.They played 2 matches and won both,Miss Bird was really pleased.The scores were 2-1 for both.Sara scored all the goals in the tournament.They all did very well!

Crista, well done for this and for helping as news team manager. Β I have written a comment so could you click on the story title and take a look please. Going to be a great piece.

2 Comments on "The Netball Game!!!"

  1. Mr Waddington | Nov 21, 2014 at 12:16 pm | Reply

    Crista, You’ve done well on this and got a good range of facts. I’d like to see your personality coming through in your writing. Perhaps you could write a really exciting headline and then, to give you an example, your first paragraph could be something like –

    “We always knew our netball players were brilliant and on Thursday the celebrated a spectacular win on Thursday at Holy Family”

    It’s always good to get a photograph and some quotes from people who took part. Ask one of the players for a reaction – how well did you play? What did it feel like when you won?

    Can you do a bit more an write the piece in two or the paragraphs please?

    Well done.

  2. πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒvery good, well done Sara!

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